Haiku Challenge for Jan. 23: ‘Stuck’

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Today’s haiku challenge:

My style is the five/seven/five syllable structure. Here are my five haiku poems:

stuck in a past loop
where flowers grow upside down
petals penetrate.

stuck in a past loop
where bees float without stingers
broken just like me.

stuck in a past loop
where heart attacks are common
when I see your face.

stuck in a past loop
where my skin peels off and flakes
memories bursting.

stuck in a past loop
where my brain is in a vice
watching what could be.

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