My latest from Three Line Thursday; three lines, 30 words, ten words per line in response to the above photo prompt. I was fortunate enough to receive an honorable mention and with the following judge comments:
“THIS PULLED MY HEARTSTRINGS, ALL AT ONCE. THERE IS SICKNESS, SHADOW OF DEATH, THE IMMORTALITY OF MEMORIES – I CAN GO ON AND ON. THIS PIECE HAS A GRIP OF LIFE IN SPITE OF ALL THE SUFFERING IT CAN BRING. AND THAT IS WHAT MAKES IT STAND OUT.”
My entry:
Fumigate this sickness with the shadow water.
Hold me down until the last bubble emerges;
let me fade away remembering what the light looked like.
