Very Short Story: Bars

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If you’re not familiar, there’s a writing prompt on Twitter for the writing community with the hashtag vss365. The “vss” stands for “very short story,” and the number is self-explanatory. Each month, a new Twitter user is tasked with posting a new word each day to prompt people. With the 280 characters available in a Tweet, a user has to come up with a story of some sort incorporating the posted word-of-the-day, although because you need to include the hashtag, the story itself is typically 273 characters (if you try to be exact, at least).

It also doesn’t necessarily have to be a story. Some play around with the form and structure by doing poetry or a haiku or whatever else.

For Aug. 20, the prompt word is “commute.”

Here is my entry:

Owen sat on his thin mattress, and supposed if he was the praying type, he’d pray for a #commute. But this place had a way of ingratiating cynicism into his system like a crust on his brain. His youthful mistake lingered 35 candles past when he last saw her without bars. #vss365

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