Haiku Challenge for Jan. 25: ‘Confirm’

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Today’s haiku challenge:

My style is the five/seven/five syllable structure. Here are my five haiku poems:

confirm my pain, please.
like trampled upon violets
kissing the burnt grass.

confirm my pain, please.
like a thermos filled with lost
dreams tasting bitter.

confirm my pain, please.
like clouds overfilled with rain
looking for targets.

confirm my pain, please.
like a cave without any
exits for the bats.

confirm my pain, please.
like rats nibbling on a corpse
still warm to the touch.

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