I haven’t done a five-line poem in a while, so why not start 2023 off (at the least the first week) with one? I’m actually thinking of turning this into a story, but here’s a “snippet” in poem form.
Swimming Around the Sun
i was swimming in a deep space ocean,
tugged by the allure of distant stars,
not noticing i was moving away from you
until i made it past the shadow of the eclipse,
and you were gone, leaving only ripples behind.
I love this.
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Thank you so much!